I had a deja-vu watching that fall. But maybe that's because it returns every year.
Now for my opinion on the actual page:
I had a deja-vu watching that fall. But maybe that's because it appears in every second comic.
I mean, not the way it's drawn, but the composition of the panels. That's not bad, it's just worth telling. I like the page, but I'm more excited about the next one.
V.: At the top of my head, I can't think of a similar scene... of course I'm convinced that there's certainly been dozens of similar scenes in comics, but I just can't think of one right now. So what are YOU thinking of?
I simply tried a few different layout approaches, and I came to the conclusion that this one would probably be best. It didn't occur to me that it could look clichéed...