I'm going to post some stuff from my secret vault within the next few days...
This one's my first attempt at a layout for page 1. I thought long and hard about how to kick off the series, so I made about a hundred changes to the first script. This layout hails from a time when the script would open on the incident at Park's lab, then cut to the airport scene (which would begin on page 3 of the finished episode).
I didn't like the layout. I also decided opening on this scene would rather confuse an unwitting reader. And I wanted to avoid confusion as much as possbile.
And don't worry if you can't read the text. You're not meant to :3