I was struggling with this page quite a bit. Many pages which looked better took me less time... well, before I started this comic I swore to never ever let a bad page slip through... I must maintain quality control from now on! One bad page will ruin the entire comic! So I put much effort into this page not looking as bad as it was always striving to become...
I don't think it's looking that bad now, but it's not one of my favorites either. At least it advances the plot :3
i like it
the force field effect is cool!
so is she like the presidents daughter?
@ Gaspode: Thanks! I was aiming for something original with the force field. Personally I think I've never seen a force field like that. Kinda like a wire-fence...
@ rakka: Thanks! She is an ambassador's daughter. I'll get into more detail as the story progresses. There'll be some sort of conflict between the government and the A.D corporation, and Naomi's father is involved with both.
The effects are worthy of praise. it actually managed to have certain 'feel' about it. ^_^
Thanks! Glad you see (and feel) it that way.